Shuichi and Yuki

Well I got a comment on my try on drawing Shuichi Shindou that inspired me to try again.
I think theres still gonna be a long way til I can get it right... But I kinda still like this one despite the various mistakes I did in this one.
Draw with pencil on Paper then trew a bit of color and text on after scanning.
Yuki and Shuichi from Gravitaion (c) who ever it was that came up with them O.o'